cv corrections

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/cv/jeremy.zurcher-CV.lou b/cv/jeremy.zurcher-CV.lou
index 17346e1..d28732c 100644
--- a/cv/jeremy.zurcher-CV.lou
+++ b/cv/jeremy.zurcher-CV.lou
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ def @MyBoxHeader right x { @MyColour @Colour { @B { x } } }
 
 @LeftDisplay @MyHeader { PERSONAL PROFILE }
 Programming is my passion and has been for the last 13 years.
-Extremly dedicated, creative and confident developer.
+Being a dedicated, creative and confident developer.
 I possess extensive knowledge in many distinctive domains such as @B FIXME
-I am fully accomplished in independant and collaborative projects and also have abundant experience in IT infrastructure design and maintenance.
+I am accomplished in independant and collaborative projects and also have abundant experience in IT infrastructure design and maintenance.
 
 Currently seeking employment where I can exploit my programming skills and expand my insight.
 
@@ -65,21 +65,21 @@ Currently seeking employment where I can exploit my programming skills and expan
     A { 2007 @LLP 2006 }
     B { @B{ Software developer } - NSA Technologies - Race boat sails manufacture }
 @Rowb
-    C { Desktop application development, used to visualy supervise the construction process of racing boat sail construction process.
+    C { Desktop application development, used to visualy supervise the process of racing boat sail construction.
     }
 @Rowa
     A { 2006 @LLP 2006 }
     B { @B{ Automation } - Zedem Sàrl - Bureau of engineer }
 @Rowb
-    C { Industrial automation programming. Special industrial machines assembly. }
+    C { Industrial automation programming. Special industrial machine assembly. }
 @Rowa
     A { 2005 @LLP 2005 }
     B { @B{ Software Developer Mandate } - Décision SA - Race boat manufacture }
 @Rowb
-    C { Programming the interface between a C++{@Char slash}OpenGL sailing navigation game and a 1:1 scale sail simulator for @I Alinghi site in @I Valence. }
+    C { Programming the interface between a C++{@Char slash}OpenGL sailing race simulator and a 1:1 scale boat TODO for @I Alinghi site in @I Valence. }
 @Rowa
     A { 2005 @LLP 2003 }
-    B { @B{ Independant Software Engineer } activity }
+    B { @B{ Independant Software Engineer } }
 @Rowb
     C { Fiduciary reporting software development (java{@Char slash}iText).
     @LLP Infrastructure deployment for small buisinesses.
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ Currently seeking employment where I can exploit my programming skills and expan
 @List
   gap { 0.4v }
   style { @MyColour @Colour {Times Base 16p} @Font @Bullet }
-@ListItem { "http://enlightenment.org" @URLLink @B{Enlightenment}: various  patches and optimisations (C).}
-@ListItem { "http://hydrogen-music.org" @URLLink @B{Hydrogen}: build system migration from scons to cmake, low level structures rewrite (C++).}
-@ListItem { "http://rubini.us" @URLLink @B{Rubinius}: FFI capabilities enhancement (C++{@Char slash}ruby).}
+@ListItem { "http://enlightenment.org" @URLLink @B{Enlightenment}: various patches and optimisation (C).}
+@ListItem { "http://hydrogen-music.org" @URLLink @B{Hydrogen}: build system migration from scons to cmake, low level structure rewrite (C++).}
+@ListItem { "http://rubini.us" @URLLink @B{Rubinius}: FFI capability enhancement (C++{@Char slash}ruby).}
 @ListItem { "https://github.com/jeremyz/ffi-efl" @URLLink @B{ffi-efl}: an FFI binding to the Enlightenment Foundation Libraries (ruby).}
 #@ListItem { "https://github.com/jeremyz/edoors-ruby" @URLLink @B{edoors-ruby}: a ruby rewrite of evenja C++ application framework concepts (ruby).}
 @ListItem { "http://cgit.asynk.ch/lock_free" @URLLink @B{lock_free}: compare-and-swap based lock free structures playground (C).}
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ y{top-ysize-5.0c}
       @ListItem { Experience in collaborative work. }
       @ListItem { Used to dive into unknown code base. }
       @ListItem { Server administration (VMware, Debian, MS 2008). }
-      @ListItem { Speaks and writtes english fluently. }
+      @ListItem { Fluent English oral and written. }
       @EndList
       @LP
     }
@@ -169,12 +169,13 @@ y{top-ysize-5.0c}
       @BulletList
         gap { 0.6v }
       @ListItem { High complexity problem comprehension. }  # appréhension des problèmes
-      @ListItem { Problem sensitivity. }                 # appréhension des problèmes
-      @ListItem { High level synthesis capabilities. }   # esprit de synthèse
-      @ListItem { Communication skills. }                # communication et partage de connaissance
-      #@ListItem { Influencing skills. }                  # capable d'affirmer ces choix
-      @ListItem { Efficiency seeking. }                  # recherche constante d'efficacité
-      @ListItem { Knowledge thirsty. }                    # soif de connaissance
+      @ListItem { Problem sensitivity. }                # appréhension des problèmes
+      @ListItem { High level synthesis capabilities. }  # esprit de synthèse
+      @ListItem { Communication skills. }               # communication et partage de connaissance
+      #@ListItem { Influencing skills. }                # capable d'affirmer ces choix
+      @ListItem { Efficiency seeking. }                 # recherche constante d'efficacité
+      @ListItem { Knowledge thirsty. }                  # soif de connaissance
+      @ListItem { Perfectionist. }                      #
       @EndList
       @LP
     }